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What do you think of my lyrics?

ya this is still in the very early stages i'm going to change it A lot but i just want to know what you think of what i got so far I didn’t come here to watch a movie I’m here to see the girl that makes me breathe And your not here to see the movie either except I’m not on your list of things to do tonight either While I sit here in the friend zone Your with him the one that will to take you home And I’m left watching you with him His hands where mine should be He moves his hands to close Past the point I can take And I turn and tell of The chorus my hearts been screaming I leave you with 3 words and him 2 And I sit here scared to death Sharing this hush void that has filled the room Knowing that it may be the last thing we share As you turn to him with those eyes Still beautiful even while they scream What the fuck just happened thanks for readin it if u liked it read my other song and become my fan heres the link http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AkXmxC5iS1pz0qiBT75eykvsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20090602112548AAdmXec

Public Comments

1. What u think about some'' rhymes?'' The song is nice..but it needs some rhyme (I'm Brazilian)=D
2. As usual, "I love it"!!!!!!