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Could someone who speaks English as their first language tell me if my text is without any grammatical errors?

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It looks good to me. :-)
Looks pretty darn good :) Nice job
it looks good. you might want to put something in the first paragraph stateing that a personal website is different from a Business. Oh and at some point intime you should mention what the appeals of the 3rd are, since it sees that it has a couple things against it.