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Another help please ;o( Is this paragraph in correct english?Thank you everybody!?

Juliette Jolie, (Laura Locatori), was born in Viareggio 22 years ago but her heart feels French as a child is raised in France by her grandmother "Pupetta" that she often goes to see even now. It 'just the grandmother who gives her the nickname of Juliette. By the age of majority Juliette, decided to travel around the world and enjoy new experiences as a model, hostess and entertainer in tourist villages. Start a training course of more than 3 years full of shows, cabaret, musicals and dance group ... Returning from this overwhelming experience the young and attractive Juliette takes singing lessons since the music has become the constant and main ingredient of her life. in Viareggio she comes into contact with producer Mark Ceramicola, with whom she immediately creates a job interesting feeling. The first production arrived on the desk of New Music International, which realizes "the pleasantness and charm" of the French character (the New Music has launched with great success the artist YuYu with the hit "Mon petit garcon") and soon was born her first single "Moi et Toi" so naturally musical and with a touch of mischief that makes the song very intriguing but also engagingly entertaining, as is Juliette Jolie: a little 'girl a bit' provocative. The song "Moi et toi" was the Italian version made with the title "You and I" if the French version hits the musicality and sweetness of the language of the Italian version hits the malice of nice words, and so it should be noted Juliette ether. The artistic experience of Pippo Landro, the incumbent and chairman of the New Music International, and his deep musical knowledge led him to think that Juliette Jolie was the perfect choice to revive "A present tu peux t'en aller" / "E now you can go, "and so we start with the completion of the fourth song in the studio. The project is developed from the outset in the round: while there will be a single outlet of a little videoclip 'retro, catchy, funny, cheerful, pleasing and spirit that combines animated images with histrionic changes in clothing Juliette always classic late '60 / '70 and exit of her first EP entitled "I, Juliette" is on a physical medium both digital. in the EP there will be 3 songs ever sung in two languages, including "moi et toi" (you and me). If you can...thank you very very much;o( I'd like to add this paragraph to wikipedia international ;o(

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1. All the spelling is correct (as far as I can see), but you need to touch up the grammar... I'll go thorugh it and tell you in detail if you want???
2. Juliette Jolie, (Laura Locatori), was born in Viareggio 22 years ago but her heart feels as a French. She was raised in France by her grandmother "Pupetta" which she often met even now. It's her grandmother who gives her the nickname of Juliette. By the age of maturity, Juliette, decided to travel around the world and enjoy new experiences as a model, hostess and entertainer in tourist villages. Start a training course of more than 3 years full of shows, cabaret, musicals and dance group ... Returning from this overwhelming experience the young and attractive Juliette takes singing lessons since the music has become the constant and main ingredient of her life. In Viareggio she comes into contact with producer Mark Ceramicola, with whom she immediately creates an interesting job. The first production arrived on the desk of New Music International, which realizes "the pleasantness and charm" of the French character (the New Music has launched with great success the artist YuYu with the hit "Mon petit garcon") and soon released her first single "Moi et Toi" so naturally musical and with a touch of mischief that makes the song very intriguing but also engagingly entertaining, as is Juliette Jolie: a little 'girl a bit' provocative. The song "Moi et toi" was the Italian version made with the title "You and I" if the French version hits the musicality and sweetness of the language of the Italian version hits the malice of nice words, and so it should be noted Juliette ether. The artistic experience of Pippo Landro, the incumbent and chairman of the New Music International, and his deep musical knowledge led him to think that Juliette Jolie was the perfect choice to revive "A present tu peux t'en aller" / "E now you can go, "and so we start with the completion of the fourth song in the studio. The project is developed from the outset in the round: while there will be a single outlet of a little videoclip 'retro, catchy, funny, cheerful, pleasing and spirit that combines animated images with histrionic changes in clothing Juliette always classic late '60 / '70 and exit of her first EP entitled "I, Juliette" is on a physical medium both digital. in the EP there will be 3 songs ever sung in two languages, including "moi et toi" (you and me).