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[Lots to read.... if you're bored?] Is this a confusing storyline?

Well.. for some strange reason my English teacher wants the class to have a whole "book" written by the end of the year. She needs a chapter this week. [By Friday] and I thought of something that I would love to see as a movie/animation someday.. She said it had to be school appropriate, so this is.. Little.. appropriate.. Anyways, so my story is going to either take place in ancient Japan, China, Korea, wherever in Asia. Just because... x3 I'll have some facts about whatever country I'm doing, but other than that everyone and everything is going to be fake. So.. here's my description.. There are these group of sward fighters "Like Samurais..] but they're not only guys. There's three girls. 1. is serious [Mei] 2. Is happy all the time [Chun] 3. Is smart [Chéng] Then the guys 1. Serious -_- [Shing] 2. A doofus :P [Jin] 3. Smart alic. :O [Fai] And this girl..[Hachya] [age 16] wants to be a... samurai.. person.. thing... Like alot of others in their.. Village. So, at the age 16 you can train to become one of the Samurai's, and many wanted to because of the "respect" you earn.. So Hachya is a total cluts. When she trains, everyone in the "group" hates her. They're all cruel to her, especially Shing. So, she gets stuck with all of them to train her. [They're cruel, blah blah] But then she finds Shing and Mei are fighting about something, and finds that they had a "relationship once" [So corny, I know.] They're both so serious. -_-* So moving around and skipping a few chapters, Shing starts being "nice" to Hachya. He's still mean, but not as bad. So.. for some reason I'll make her able to join, and they all have a "mission" to go kill some group of "enemies" >:O And Hachya stuck with Shing and he's pissed. Shing and Mei flirt before they leave off, and Hachya is a bit jealous, So, while they're living together in the home, they start to "like" each other and Shing finds out that Hachya had a "past" where she burned down a house, killing many people to help her dying sister when she was 10, and ever since she tried to help others. [Like a Kenshin reference. x3 [that's an anime]] And the Hachya finds out that Shing wants to be a.. doctor..[ yes.. a doctor, I can't think of anything better. x.X] They fall in love,Mei becomes jealous, all that jazz. [x3] So skipping again, there's an epic fight, and the "group" has to lean on a falling cliff. [their enemy died falling off] Hachya falls off, Shing grabs her hand, but Hachya sees that if she goes with them, they'd all fall off, too. So she lets go, dies, and Shing becomes more emo for a while. The "group" breaks up, and its 5 years later. Shing becomes a "doctor", and he has to go to a job with a 17 year old girl named... eh.. Koa. She's the daughter of a RICH military general in Japan. And she's a total *****. Koa has... a disease.. [I'll think of the disease] She's always pushing Shing around, hitting him, beating him, and he's sort of a comic relief character now. x3 But he's still the main, and now Koa is, too. But one day, during a war, their whole town/country/everything around them blows on fire, and so they're both stuck together. Koa's father dies. Then they run into this other little boy, [Song] who wants to be in the Japanese Military, the girl decides to train him, and blah. Then a 13 year old girl, Zi, who's parents died during the explosion joins their group. [She comes and goes, because her brother [who;s in the war] is with her half the time, but he dies later.. so.. Yeah.. [Song and Zi have crushies on each other. =3] And then.. a young, "tough" ex. [Wang] samurai joins who's only 26. [Because he trained young.] and a 23 year old woman named Taili, who was in a plot to kill Wang at first, but somehow joins. She and Koa fight over Shing alot... [Shing is a pushover now] Shing starts having dreams about the girl who died who he loved, and other.. jazziness.. x3 He finds out that Hachya's sister, Lixiang, wants to kill Shing and his old 'Samurai" group, because she thinks they killed her. And so.. an new plot begins. And I have no idea how I'll end it. x3 So there is my honor roll paper for english. x.X ------------------------- So basically, that's my entire.. plot. o_O I DO HAVE better grammar then that. I promise. I have to go somewhere, so I'm in a hurry to write something down to ask if its confusing? Besides my grammar.. just, is the plot confusing? AND YES. I've been watching TOO much anime. XD But I'd really love to see that as an American anime, PG13 rated, though, not Y7. Okay. There goes my strange head. Hope you enjoyed my badly grammar description. [All of those were Chinese names. :P]

Public Comments

1. Your English teacher is a fucking idiot. Not everyone is an artist. Also you can't spell.
2. Hahahahaha don't worry, I love anime too. It's great, so this really appeals to me. I think you should end it with another epic battle, and another few people die... make it SAD, but then, make Hachya be alive, to end the battle (maybe she fell off, but survived... and was taken in by this ninja family who healed her, and began trainer her to be BETTER), and when she returns, her and Shing get married? And... just, make it intense, and romantic, and sweet, and FUN, and scary. :) Good luck!
3. WOW....your teacher sure is asking a lot from you. haha, I love how serious everything is, and then it starts winding down after that Hachya chick dies. Like, totally new sub-plot that doesn't really seem to tie in with everything. Now that's kinda like reading for no purpose. The names are really confusing, probably because they're all like ching chong chang. Now that should be worrying considering that I'm chinese. :) ancient Japan....so it's going to have hiri-kari and suicide rituals? Kudos!
4. Well... Its.. Unique?